OK, I'm finally finding time to comment. I really like that you explore the aftermath of having sex and waking up on the rooftop of a venue - because as gorgeous as that scene is and as awesome as it sounds it's not very practical... you might get stuck, apparently. I also love that you show Curt's romantic and tender side - and damn, the image of him breaking into a bar and stealing water bottles for Arthur is pretty cute. (It just popped into my head that bottled water may not have been such a thing in the mid 70s - I honestly don't know when that trend started - but 'stealing' water from a tap would not be half as much fun.)
I did catch a couple stylistic things and some typos. My offer to beta still stands if you write more stuff for this fandom - I just love seeing it.
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Date: 2013-08-08 02:17 am (UTC)I did catch a couple stylistic things and some typos. My offer to beta still stands if you write more stuff for this fandom - I just love seeing it.