Haha, yeah I thought the same thing about the bottled water, but I did look into it a little. Seems they've been bottling water like that for awhile but it didn't become trendy til the 90s or whatever. I just kinda went with it that a bar might have it and decided not to brain fuck it too much. I do most of my writing on my phone's notepad function and if something comes up I head straight to google.
I was somewhat inspired to write it more realistically after doing a little drug slang research because "button" kinda threw me. Upon finding out it's another word for shrooms, it kind of went from there. While I've never done shrooms, I've had a ton of friends who have and heard many stories. I've personally dropped acid, so I kinda figure hallucinogens wipe you out. I just couldn't help but wonder what kind of shape could have been in the next morning, lovely night that had happened with Curt. Most writers seems to ignore the fact that Arthur was likely tripping balls. Lol. Not that there's anything wrong with that. The last concert I saw, I'll confess to being not one bit sober. So I relate to that.
I do need a beta. Lol. I've gotten better controlling my tendency to ramble. I'm proud to say I've broken my comma addiction. Really, I just need someone to catch my typos and help me reel in my more florid tendencies.
Thank you for the review. I know there's some awkwardness and I may go back over it once I'm more confident with the fandom. Mind you, I'm more confident re-entering a fandom, but I'm always anxious when I'm fresh.
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Date: 2013-08-08 02:54 am (UTC)I was somewhat inspired to write it more realistically after doing a little drug slang research because "button" kinda threw me. Upon finding out it's another word for shrooms, it kind of went from there. While I've never done shrooms, I've had a ton of friends who have and heard many stories. I've personally dropped acid, so I kinda figure hallucinogens wipe you out. I just couldn't help but wonder what kind of shape could have been in the next morning, lovely night that had happened with Curt. Most writers seems to ignore the fact that Arthur was likely tripping balls. Lol. Not that there's anything wrong with that. The last concert I saw, I'll confess to being not one bit sober. So I relate to that.
I do need a beta. Lol. I've gotten better controlling my tendency to ramble. I'm proud to say I've broken my comma addiction. Really, I just need someone to catch my typos and help me reel in my more florid tendencies.
Thank you for the review. I know there's some awkwardness and I may go back over it once I'm more confident with the fandom. Mind you, I'm more confident re-entering a fandom, but I'm always anxious when I'm fresh.